This might be a classic essay introduction that is five-paragraph. But Alex’s professor doesn’t like it. She underlines the initial two sentences, and she writes, “This is too general. Get to the true point.” She underlines the next and sentences that are fourth and she writes, “You’re just restating the question I inquired. What’s your point?” She underlines the sentence that is final and then writes within the margin, “What’s your thesis?” because the .